Saturday, April 18, 2009

Project 1: Identity Poster: David Murphy

I learned a lot from the critique and seeing the excellent work from the other students. So being dissatisfied with my first attempt I revamped the poster using a thumbnail sketch I made from one of Nicole's inspiration posters. I feel that having three images is more visual interesting than the two from my original poster. Enlarging the focal image and reducing the dark valued "party" image helped to reduce competition among the images.

2 comments:

  1. Nice revisions,

    both designs are light years ahead of where we were on crit day.

    prof scott

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  2. Awesome revision, I'll take two!

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